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'As' was a hint that 'they had talent' is a reason. We needed to say who 'they' are to make our claim box clear. The part of the sentence before the 'as' contains the position, but it isn't fully fleshed out, so we needed to rewrite this as a proper sentence.
© Austhink 2007. Rationale Exercises version 0.1, Sep-07
Note: these exercises are undergoing continual improvement. Next time you come back they might be a bit different.
